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Topic: Factory o' Nails! (Read 14625 times)
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Sebastian
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Trip-post!  Was thinking about bloodying his clothes up a bit but I'll save that for later. |
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beckmen
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Nice. Is that supposed to be anybody, or just some dude?
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Company Man
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Maybe some on the razor, and some on the shoes... always blood on the shoes.
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Thedus
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I think it was a good idea to not include blood. this is one of those pieces that works best when the viewer fills in the back story/story on their own. Adding the razor with a holstered gun was a nice touch!
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Sebastian
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Nice. Is that supposed to be anybody, or just some dude?
It's for a thing. I'm having trouble with adding character to my drawings. Emotional gestures in the face, to be more precise. Something I'll have to learn with time. I'm very happy with the wolf on the previous page though. I think it was a good idea to not include blood. this is one of those pieces that works best when the viewer fills in the back story/story on their own. Adding the razor with a holstered gun was a nice touch!
Good observation, thanks! |
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beckmen
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Are you in school, or is this an autodidactic exercise?
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Sebastian
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Autodidactic fo'sure! But I'm working on a script for either an animated movie, "tv-series" or a video game that basically involves Jack the Ripper, Ku-Klux-Klan, Werewolves and Lord Lucifer set in the early 20th century.
It seems more likely I'll work it into a video game - which I'm very happy about since that's the field of work I have the most experience with - though I would like to produce small animated shorts pretelling the events of the game or something.
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Sebastian
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« Last Edit: June 20, 2011, 03:32:26 PM by Sebastian »
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Company Man
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I see nipple!
Tastefull nipple!
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Sebastian
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That's a tasty nipple indeed!
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Thedus
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I like the tapestry-like feel to the first piece. And the symbolism is pretty well crafted too.
The only crit I have on he second is that the bath water looks like milk, which kind of pulls the viewer out of the moment since it feels odd. Other than that I love the nipple piece.
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beckmen
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I think the bath water looks like a bubble bath that's been all bubbled out, possibly bath salts too.
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Sebastian
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Some minor updates: (printed this one too)    (really don't like this one)  (original sketch version)  |
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« Last Edit: July 15, 2011, 12:25:44 PM by Sebastian »
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I like the tapestry-like feel to the first piece. And the symbolism is pretty well crafted too.
The only crit I have on he second is that the bath water looks like milk, which kind of pulls the viewer out of the moment since it feels odd. Other than that I love the nipple piece.
I think it looks like soapy water. As in "Wears the soap", "Yes, it does" |
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Accept that some days you are the pidgeon, and others the statue.
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Company Man
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Still the best. Night of the Comet. |
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